The shadow stretched for miles

HOLLISTER GUYHOLLISTER GUY Regular
edited July 2011 in Life
I'm your neighbor
Revenge is my destiny
If I'm not dead now
Then how could I ever be
If you reach at my anima
It will be the end
I knew you were the thief
But I thought you as a friend
Judgement means nothing
In the land of el muerto
Because when we're already dead
This life's just begun
Anything you've said
Everythings been done

Comments

  • edited July 2011
    I really liked this one.
  • HOLLISTER GUYHOLLISTER GUY Regular
    edited July 2011
    Don't eye the mirror to long
    Lost in thought
    You're being watched
    And music plays
    Time slows down
    Though it doesn't matter
    Whether anything is real
    Especially the memories
  • RemadERemadE Global Moderator
    edited July 2011
    Agreed, I also like :thumbsup:
  • HOLLISTER GUYHOLLISTER GUY Regular
    edited July 2011
    Last night went down to the river
    Blew my horn and I wet my feet
    Staring at the moon for minutes wondering
    Sun, how do you see yourself
    A feather fell from above
    Distant scowl of the owl held the answer
    Some questions mustn't be
  • HOLLISTER GUYHOLLISTER GUY Regular
    edited July 2011
    The owl illuminated by the moonbeams
    Can't possibly eye me wiser
    Clearly holding all my answers
    I ask him for a message
    The first response was silence
    So I pleaded furthermore
    Led into a breakthrough as the eyes expand
    Shooting rays of light directly into me
    I see everything
    I'd rather watch the moon at night
    And hear the river flow
    Instead I live alone in fright
    Because there's too much that I know
  • HOLLISTER GUYHOLLISTER GUY Regular
    edited July 2011
    Burn down the spark
    As sundown approaches
    Dried grass provides a mass
    Juniper branches as fuel stacked
    Ignite the memories
    As if it were new
    Twisting smoke fog
    Fills the Gully
    Till the view
    Is clouded fully
    By the third hour
    The flames devour
    Logs and twigs are ember
    The moon is new
    So stars command the sky
    Being on the rocks
    Feet hanging off the falls
    Provides the perfect setting
  • GoingNowhereGoingNowhere Global Moderator
    edited July 2011
    That first one you posted was really nice :)
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