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The Crush - based on the movie, but with a MUCH be
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THE CRUSH
This story is based around the movie the Crush starring Alicia Silverstone
and Cary Elwes. I was quite dissatisfied with the movie because I saw a
lot of potential in the story. So here is my rewrite. Sorry I can't
remember the names of the characters from the movie so I just used the
real ones. The story picks up at the scene with the swing for those of
you that have seen the movie.
Background: Cary has rented the guest house of Alicia parents. Her
parents who are quite wealthy, really don't understand Alicia. Alicia,
typical of a teenager, is curious about the new neighbor. After
befriending the new guest, Cary, she begins to fall for him. Alicia
tries to seduce him by taking him to a romantic spot and tries to kiss
him. Cary is quite taken aback by her affection and can't quite fathom the
idea of having a relationship with a fourteen year old. Cary has gotten
the nerve up to confront Alicia's about her feeling about him. He feels
that he must put an end to this puppy love that she has for him before its
to late.
The story begins:
crafty's "THE CRUSH"
Alicia is currently swinging in the garden of her parents sprawling home.
Cary is walking up to her.
"Can I talk to you?", Cary said
"Sure", Alicia replied.
"Alicia, I just want to tell you that I like you as *friend* and that I
will always be your friend"
"I like you too, Cary"
"No, I mean just as a *friend* and that's all.", Cary said emphatically.
Alicia stopped swinging. She tilts her head and a smirk appears on her
naturally pouty lips. She looks over the top of her dark sunglasses and
says,
"You mean 'friend' as in a friend that sneaks into my room to watch me
undress?"
Cary stunned says "Wha..?"
"I know that you were there. Its ok.", Alicia said nonchalantly
Cary's mind reels back to the other day. The day he snuck into her room.
For what purpose he really didn't know. He could say that it was because
he was looking for that very special picture of him as a child. The one
that Alicia said was "cute". He was sure that she had taken it from him.
But secretly he knew that he was looking for more in her room that day.
He was in the process of looking through the room when Alicia almost
discovered him. Driven by fear he looked for the nearest escape and
finding none he darted into a nearby closet. Alicia entered the room
dressed only in panties and a large oxford butt on down shirt. He can see
this through the slats of the closet door. Preparing for a bath she
begins to disrobe. First slipping out of her little girl panties and then
removing her shirt. Her back is to him. But even so he gasps at the
sight of her naked body. He instinctively and subconsciously backs up and
in the process knocked down a hanger from within the closet.
Alicia turned toward the close, startled by the noise. She looked spooked
but only momentarily and she quickly went back to disrobing. He shuddered
slightly in the closet as he eyed her young 14 year old body up and down.
Man was she beautiful. Her face was young but her eyes were dark and
filled with mystery. She was petite in stature with smallish breasts that
were well on the way to growing. Her breasts looked milky white and were
firm in the way that only young breasts can be. They were small and wou
ld fit easily in his hand. Her nipples were small too but were hard and
stood up at least a half inch away from her breast. He continued down her
body. Her stomach was flat yet not so skinny that you could see her
muscles. Her crotch was covered by a light swatch of neatly shaved hair.
He could make out the faint outline of her lips though the hair. Her legs
were strong and well formed. Not muscular but smooth and toned.
She continue to undress but he could swear that she was posing for him.
Why would she be spending so much time in front of the closet. He was
sure that she didn't know he was there. Sweat dripped off his brow as he
focused on being perfectly still and quiet. If she found him in there her
father would surely cut off his dick.
Abruptly Alicia turned towards the door and went off to the bathroom.
Cary breathed a sigh of relief and got the hell out of there as quickly as
he could.
Snapping out of his daydream he remembered where he was. He managed to
get out a "Uh what do you mean? "
Alicia repeated " I know you were there...in my room. I know you were
looking at me. Did you like what you saw?"
Cary stuttered,"It was wrong...what I did was wrong...this is wrong...its
got to stop"
Alicia repeated slowly "Did you like what you saw?"
Cary was looking down at his feet. Embarrassed and suddenly put on the
offensive he wasn't handling the situation very well.
Cary replied" No..." and was about to finish his sentence when Alicia
interrupted him.
"Well you certainly could have fooled me." as she looked at his crotch
momentarily and then went back to swinging.
OH SHIT! Cary, realizing that his little daydream had a real
effect on him. Sure enough his 7 1/2 dick was making a grotesque tent in
his shorts. He wished he had worn underwear today. It might have helped
mask his desire, but without it, his cock was free and unencumbered and
currently quite hard.
He looked up at Alicia swinging . On every stroke of the swing the wind
blew her dress up just enough to where he could see the white of her
panties. This was making the situation in his shorts worse. He started
to walk away dejected that he had been defeated mentally by a 14 year old
girl and to top it off she knew how much she turned him on. This was
exactly what he wanted to avoid.
Alicia seeing him starting to leave leaped into action. In mid swing she
vaulted off of the moving swing landing only inches away from Cary. Cary
wheeled around not expecting her latest assault. She threw her arms
around him and pulled him close to her body. Her young breasts mashing
themselves against his smooth chest.
"No, this is wrong Alicia, I'm 27 years old your only 14. I'm staying at
your parents guest house. This is wrong." Cary said.
Alicia didn't respond. But her eyes spoke volumes. They burned now with
desire and lust. Cary knew he was in for it.
In one motion she dropped to her knees and at the same time grasped Cary's
shorts and pulled them down around his ankles. She sat very still as she
watched his prick not saying anything not doing anything just watching it
slowly twitch . Her small hands on his legs were the only thing holding
him. Yet he did not move away, he too stood silently . It seemed like
minutes passed.
Finally she moved slowly sticking her tongue out first and then beginning
at the bottom of his balls licked in a straight line up and then over his
prick and then down the shaft and then up to his navel. Cary's knees
nearly gave way. He looked down into her eyes. He knew that it was wrong
but that was in the far corners of his mind. Right now he knew he had to
get some.
Cary gently grasped her head and pulled it back onto his dick and slowly
guided her mouth down. Her mouth was hot and wet. He slid part of his 7
1/2 dick into her mouth. He gasped at the sensation.
Alicia needed no more guidance. She grasped the base of his manhood and
slowly and methodically slid up and down the shaft with her mouth. At
first only a third of his prick got into her mouth but slowly and surely
she worked his whole dick into her hot and wet mouth. He could feel the
tip of his dick sliding down her throat. Still not a sound was uttered.
Only the sound mad by Alica deepthroating his cock slowly and
methodically. He looked down at her. She was hard at work. Spittle and
sperm were oozing out of the side of her mouth, sweat was on her brow but
still she had that desire and determination in her eyes.
He felt his orgasm building up deep within his balls. They grew large and
heavy. His knees were shaking and he knew that he couldn't hold back much
longer. The sight of this 14 year old girl stuffing his prick in and out
of her mouth was too much for him to handle and he unleashed his load
violently. Alicia looked for the first time scared. She withdrew his
cock from her mouth just in time for the first squirt that landed squarely
on her lips. Sperm was flying every where: landing on her shirt, in her
hair and in her mouth. The orgasm he was having was strong and draining.
With each spasm it felt as if he was getting kicked in balls. Alicia
instinctively milked his dick with her hand as his spasms continued
Cary dropped to his knees, spent. Alicia was looking nasty with sperm
dripping from her face and neck. She leaned over and said " It will be my
turn next time" and got up and walked back into her house. Cary was left
there exausted, shorts around his ankles, just be ginning to realize what
had happened. He laid there for a moment just trying to get a handle on
it. She was so young...she was so good. When he came to his senses he
realized that had better get up before someone saw him so he collected
himself and made for the guest house he was renting.
...to be continued. Please send me your suggestions for other scenes.
Crafty - 6/21/94
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