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Karak, Part 11


All stories on this web site are purely FICTIONAL. The people depicted within these stories only exist in someone's IMAGINATION. Any resemblence between anyone depicted in these stories and any real person, living or dead, is an incredible COINCIDENCE too bizarre to be believed. If you think that you or someone you know is depicted in one of these stories it's only because you're a twisted perverted little fucker who sees conspiracies and plots where none exist. You probably suspect that your own MOTHER had sex with ALIENS and COWS and stuff. Well, she didn't. It's all in your head. Now take your tranquilizers and RELAX.
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Karak by Waldo
Chapter 9a Life as a Valdarian (11 of 12)

There are 10 chapters in 12 postings, which do not break
down into equal lengths. The synopsis is listed as Chapter
0. For purposes of putting them on Internet, I have broken
Chapter 5 into 5a - 5b and Chapter 9/10 into 9a - 9b
because those chapters were so long. The chapters are:

Chapter 0. A general discussion on writing this series
Chapter 1. Finding the Lair
Chapter 2. The Inn
Chapter 3. Town
Chapter 4. My time is up.
Chapter 5a & 5b. Maya
Chapter 6. Valdar (this chapter)
Chapter 7. Allegiance to Cak
Chapter 8. Lips can be used for
Chapter 9a & 9b & 10. Life as a Valdarian & (start of this chapter)
very short Ending Chapter

Although this story has a transgender hero/heroine, I
do not follow the concept that I observed in so many of
the TG stories where the main character describes in
detail over and over, the clothes that they are putting
on. Or how they apply their make-up and which colors
they use. I tried to describe what it would feel like to
wake up in a different body and to learn how to adapt to
that body's different needs. I tried to describe how a
macho man would think after he wound up as a woman
in a society where women are third class citizens.

The I tried to describe how he feels after the brain
washing session when she now has strong female
sexual desires for the person that she no longer hates.
If you were to miss Chapter 5A & 5B, you might not
even be aware of the sex change.

If these type of stories or sexual content are not your
"cup of tea"; or you are under age; then DO NOT READ
PAST THIS POINT IN ANY OF THE CHAPTERS.

Chapter 9 - Life as a Valdarian

He canceled the rest of his work for the day and we stayed in his
quarters, enjoying each other's bodies and what we could do to
each other. That night we made love six different times, making
a total of eleven times. When the maid woke me to leave the
following morning, he refused to let me go and made love to me
again. He kept me in his quarters for three days and nights,
finally sending me back to my bed so that he could rest.

Maconda told me that he very seldom kept anyone for two days
much less for three days and she was very proud of me. I just
wanted to take my vitamins and rest. I was wore out.

*******

Maconda was promoted to be an officer. I am very happy for her.
She is proud of my skills. During the day, I practice with the
other warrior women and am very seldom defeated. Maconda
said that I defeat myself because I try something that requires
brute force and I don't have enough strength to pull it off. But I
am only defeated once when I am defeated and then I cannot be
beat by the same method again. Maconda says that I am the
best fighter that she has ever seen.

******

I am now in command of my own company of women warriors.
With just these thirty women, I was able to capture an armed
force of over two hundred men. In two other battles, I was the
first one over the ramparts and it was my sword at King Augkst's
throat that was the turning point in our battle against the
Morkdians. Valdar is a much larger kingdom now, thanks to my
efforts.

I have moved out of the barracks and now live in the castle,
close to Cak. The uniform that he had made for me is very
special. It consists of a short skirt and a leather halter that
supports my breast but lets my nipples show. My weapons belt
contains a short sword and two throwing knives. While
everyone else in Cak's army wears the standard tunic, I am
permitted to show my body off. I stand beside Cak's throne
during ceremonies. Not only am I his best warrior, but I am his
favorite woman.

My company of warriors accompanied Cak to the border. The
Kings of all the southern region kingdoms requested a meeting
with Cak to discuss peace. They think that he is going to try to
conquer them and spread his rule over this lands. They are
right. We will overwhelm them one at a time. Most of their men
will flee or be killed. The women will become one with us and
help us with our next conquest. My job is to serve my Master by
training these women to fight and to kill in his behalf.

Sometimes during our training, it gets a little rough and
someone dies. We can't help it because that is their duty. I try to
make them stronger and to give them the best chance at surving
a hand-to-hand fight, but it doesn't always work.

At the border, my best warriors were guarding Cak. We knew
that the men would try to kill Cak so we were very alert to
anything that they would try. We were holding the meeting in a
big hunting lodge. Cak requested that I wait outside until he
summoned me.

As I made my rounds of my guards making sure that they were
on duty, I ignored the men who jeered my warriors and me. They
laugh at us and call us names while they try to seduce us. Two
of my best warriors, Eurotial and Lasa, are guarding the front
door, while Lixu heads up a troop guarding the rear. As I
approach Eurotial, she whispers to me "I am going to kill him if
he tries to touch her again."

I looked at the man that she was glaring at. He was big, strong,
and dirty. I had seen the type many times before. Some of the
group looked familar and I thought that I might have fought
either with them or against them in some of my previous woman
warrior jobs. He and his friends were laughing and making
snide remarks about getting a blow job from a woman without a
tongue. Lasa was trying to ignore them, but I knew that the
remarks bothered her.

I walked over to the group of men and quietly said "You have had
enough fun. Why don't you go back to your cave and beat your
meat. None of us want anything to do with you or your cock."

He laughed and looked at his friends before he responded "You
sure are cute. Why don't you show me what you can use your
tongue for. Give you two guidars for a blow job and might even
make it three if you do a good job."

I ignored his remark and repeated "Please move back to the
lowlands. We don't want to start anything, but we have a job to
do. If you don't leave now, it will force me to do something."

He reached out his paw of a hand to cup my breast but I saw it
coming and sidestepped as my knee came up hard in his groin.
My face was inches from his face as the pain shot through his
body. His face changed from a leer to shock to pain as he slowly
sank to the floor.

I stepped back and said "Please take your friend back before I
have to hurt him again or anyone else."

Another man walked out of the back of the group and stepped
forward to challenge, which I knew would probably happen. I
would have to really hurt this one to keep them under control.
As I looked at him, I knew that he was a real warrior, not a
common muscle as the man that I just took out.

From the lodge's open door, I heard Cak's voice shout to me
"Maya, our friends would like a demonstration of your fighting
abilities. You have my permission to kill several of their
warriors."

I looked at the warrior in front of me and smiled as I pointed at
him "You." I declared. Then I pointed at three other men and
said "I will take you all on at once."

The warrior nodded and pointed at one of the other men. The
man smiled, pulled his sword and came charging at me. I met
his charge and deflected his first thrust with my drawn sword.
As he raised his sword to chop my head off, I stepped in with my
dagger to his chest. I quickly pulled it out and backed away
before he could fall, knowing that I had pentrated a vital organ.

The warrior nodded congratulations to me and pointed to the
other two men. They drew their swords and started circling me.
My sword was in my right hand and my dagger in the left as I
jabbed at them to keep a little distance. I knew that one would
thrust at me to divert my attention and the other one would use
that opportunity to come in for the kill.

From the right, I heard the battle scream as he raised his sword
to swing at me. Without looking at him again, I shifted my
weight and turned as I thrust into the man who had been on my
blind side as he raised his sword high to chop my head. I kept
moving past him, using his body as a shield from the man with
the scream. The man that I just stabbed with my sword fell
wrong and wreched my sword from my grasp before I could pull
it from his body. As I repositioned myself, with only my dagger
as a weapon, the screaming man swung at me. I sidestepped his
swing and slashed his arm. He was lucky because I was aiming
for his face.

We slowly circled the two dead men. He positioned himself so
that I could not get to my sword. I knew that I had one chance
and I took it. With a underhanded throw, I flung my dagger at
his unprotected throat and hit my target. As my dagger stuck in
his throat, I leaped around him and grabbed the heavy sword of
one of the men that I had already killed. I swung at his head as
he dropped his sword and pulled my dagger out. The force of my
blade was enough to pentrate his skull and kill him. I grabbed
my dagger from his jerking hand and turned toward my last
enemy.

He looked at me, smiled and said quietly "It is too beautiful a
day to die for the sole purpose of being someone's entertainment.
I look forward to the day that I can meet you on a battlefield.
And I hope that we are on the same side that day. Good luck,
my beautiful woman. You won't have any more problems with
me or my men today."

He turned and walked away. The rest of the men that had been
milling about, slowly turned and followed him, leaving their
three dead comrades on the ground. I recovered my sword and
cleaned my dagger and sword on their clothes.

When I turned around, Cak and all of the Kings were on the
patio watching me. Cak said "Very good. Now, please get my
trophy and bring it inside."

I went to the wagon and removed Karak's sword and sword belt.
When I entered the lodge, everyone was sitting around the table.
No one was saying anything as they watched me enter. I laid
Karak's sword and belt on the table and stood beside Cak. One
of the Kings looked at the belt and said "Aye, it is his. I would
know it anywhere. He would not give it up unless he was dead."
Then he looked at me as he continued "Or bewitched. We cannot
count on Karak's help anymore."

I was standing beside Cak. I was glistening from my exertion
and knew that I looked beautiful. Cak said quietly because
everyone was listening to him "Mayi, remove your clothes and
show everyone what a beautiful body you have. You may keep
your sandals on."

I unbuckled my sword belt and let it drop to the floor. As I
unbuttoned my blouse, every eye was watching me. I opened my
blouse and removed it, revealing my soft leather bra. I
unfastened the one snap in the front, releasing my breasts and
dropped my bra to the ground on my sword. Then I put my
hands on my short skirt and pushed it down around my ankles
and stepped out of it.

I stood there, with my breasts thrust out, my hands on my hips.
I knew that I was a very attractive woman and every man in that
room wanted me for their own. But they couldn't have me. I
belong to Cak. He is my master and my only lover.

Cak said "Mayi, I would like a blow job."

I dropped to my knees in front of Cak and undid his trousers,
letting them slide to his knees. I held his limp cock in one
hand as my tongue licked out and touched the
dickhead.

I was ready and willing to do this. I love Cak and love
being his woman. I want to have sex with him and will
give him anything that he wants. If he wants me to
blow him in front of all of these kings, I will blow him
and love every moment of it. I love the taste of his
cock and enjoy the warm feeling that I have when it is
inside my mouth. Sometimes back at the castle, I just
hold it in my mouth and enjoy the way that it fills.

I eagerly sucked the full length of his cock into my
mouth. As I ministered to his cock, it grew larger until
I had a full ten inches to enjoy. I knew that I was an
expert cocksucker and wanted to show these men
what I could to do. After I got it in my mouth, I did not
touch his cock with my hands, instead I controlled the
dick totally with my mouth, my tongue and my teeth,
bobbing my head up and down vigorously on the stiff
cock.

I used my nose to push his cock up against his belly
as my tongue lashed across his scrotal sac. I attacked
Cak's large balls, sucking first one and then the other
fully into my mouth and chewing tenderly. Cak
moaned with delight while at the same time I was
squeezing and mauling my sensitive nipples, working
myself into a feverish state. I briefly sucked on each of
his balls before returning my attention to his
dickhead. My hand twisted his raging hardon as my
teeth grated across the sensitive underside of his
glans.

My other hand, slid between my own thighs, gliding
over myself, exciting myself. I felt the wetness dripping
from myself. I was eager and ready to let Cak fuck me.
I looked into Cak's eyes and said "Fuck me, oh please
fuck me - I need it so bad!"

Cak put his hands into my hair and messed it as he
grunted "Not now. Later! I want you to suck me dry."

I took his large cock back into my mouth and sucked it
all in. I slowly took it in and then let it out. As I
slowly let it out, I would put my hand on the shaft and
jerk it a couple of times as I kissed and sucked on the
cockhead. After a couple of minutes of this, I felt his
cum welling up inside him and prepared myself for the
wonderful rush of warm salty jism that I loved.

As he came, he thrust into my mouth and I took as
much of him as I could. My mouth was full with his
cock and I could feel the warm liquid gushing into my
mouth. I tried to swallow as much as I could but it is
difficult to swallow with a big cock ramming your
throat. A lot of the cum escaped my mouth and
drolled down my face onto my chest.

When he was finished cuming, I sucked him dry and
licked him clean. Then I stood and looked at the men
who had watched me do this to Cak. I held my head
high. He was my man and I enjoy making my man
happy. I felt very proud and happy that I had serviced
my man and made him happy. I knew that his cum
was glistening on my heaving chest and that my own
pussy juices had leaked copiously from me as I sucked
his rampaging dick. I could feel my juices flowing down
my leg.

Cak pulled his trousers back up and said "Thank you.
Go get cleaned up and return to your duties."

I picked up my clothes and sword and walked out the
back door. As I exited the building, I heard Cak said
"As you can see, Karak is no more. What is left of
Karak belongs to me, to do with as I please."

He must be talking about Karak's sword and sword
belt. I clean up and resume my duties. The rest of the
meeting was un-eventiful. They gave Cak what he
wanted. We returned home happy.

I was very happy. My uniform is getting a little tight on me.
I am bearing Cak's child.

********

It was a boy. We named it Karak. It took me several weeks to
get back into shape. My halter had to be re-made to support my
larger breasts. Cak gave me Carah to be the nanny for our child
as I get my body back into shape.

Four months after the baby's birth Maconda and I are summoned
to Cak's chambers. We enter and stand as Cak reads some
papers on his desk. One of our sisters is standing naked in his
chamber. Then he looks up and says "I have a mission for the
two of you. Our friend Karak has some spies in town and I want
them destroyed. They are spreading lies about me and about
you, Sister Maya. They say that you are a whore that came here
on a mission to kill me. Our friends in town don't know you and
don't know what to believe. I want you to show our friends who
you really are and how you are one of us. I want you to kill them
for me. Leave today and return within four days."

He leans back, looks at our naked sister and then back to me.
He smiles and says "No, leave tomorrow morning. Sister Maya
will spend the night with me. Sister Rayk, dress and return to
your work assignments."

******

Maconda and I rode into town. We timed it to get there after
sundown. She led me to a home that was maintained by our
Sisters. The Sisters have news for us. "The soldiers are still
staying at the Inn."

I looked at Maconda and she said "Go kill the remaining
soldiers."

I nodded and left the house. When I got close to the Inn, I took
my time and made sure that no one was watching the Inn or had
observed me as being anything more than a normal warrior
woman passing through town. I saw a soldier enter the Inn and
risked a glance through a window. I saw two soldiers drinking at
a table.

I went in through a back door and up the back stairs without
being seen. My plan is to hide in a room and kill them when they
come upstairs. I enter a room, recognizing it as the room that I
had stayed in before. I open the door and enter. No one is
staying here or has been here in some time. I wait.

After three hours, one of the soldiers came upstairs and went
into his room. I listened to him undress and lie down on his bed.
After a couple of minutes, I could hear him snore. I cross the
hall and enter the room where he is sleeping. I do not like what I
am doing, but this is what Maconda ordered. I would prefer to
meet him in a fair fight and take my chances on my skill.

He didn't even wake up.

I look downstairs and the other soldier is not there. I ease
outside and see him out back with a jar of ale. I walk up to him
and he doesn't even see me. As I slit his throat, he jumps, but
he is already dying. As he slumps over, I pick up his jar of ale
and take it with me. He won't be drinking any more.

As I walk away, someone steps out of the shadows. Although I
had examined the area closely before I approached the soldier, I
had not discovered this person sitting in the dark. I put my hand
on my sword and slowly approach this person. He pulls back his
hood covering his face and in the faint light, I see a familiar face.
I don't know who he is, but he looks very familiar. He says
quietly "I knew you would come, sooner of later, if I put the
correct bait out. My name is Josm. I have been asked to give
you this envelope."

I don't know who he is, but for some reason, I do not kill
immediately kill him. He has to be my enemy but something
holds me back from killing him. I reach out and take the
envelope from him. I can't read it because it is too dark so I fold
the paper and slid it into my pack. Josm turns and walks away.

I return to where Maconda is sleeping. I wake her and tell her
that we can return tomorrow but do not say something about
Josm. For some reason, I don't want her to know about him,
although I have shared every other thought that I have had since
coming to Valdar, with her. She mumbles something and turns
back over to sleep. I go outside with the jar of ale and drink it.

I have just sent two men to whatever heaven their god has. I
didn't mind killing them, but I didn't like doing it while they slept
or were too drunk to resist. However, I am a good soldier and
do as I am ordered, even if I don't really agree with it.

********

I had a headache from the wine and was not very pleasant
company on the ride back to Valdar. We got to our barracks
after dark and Maconda went to report while I took care of the
horses and turned in. When I got into my room, I started
unpacking and discovered the envelope that I had put there the
night before. I looked at the outside which said

"To my longtime friend, Karak or to my new friend Maya."

Why is this letter addressed to my enemy Karak and to me? I
open it and read:

Karak or Maya

I am dying tonight but I have one more thing to do
before I die. Many years ago, I was able to see that
Karak would need my magic to become a woman. But
I was not able to see beyond that point. Tonight, when
the Karak soul was transferred into the body of Maya,
I saw something new.

I do not know what it is or what I can do. I do not
have time on Earth to further investigate this matter and
can only write this letter, with the instructions that it be
given to Maya two years after tonight. So Maya, if
you are reading this, it has been over two years since
we worked our magic and Karak became Maya, so that
he could enter the Valdar Kingdom to kill Cak.

I see confusion and delusion in your future. I see you
as a puppet of Cak. I see you being a willing servant of
Cak and honoring him with your body. I see him using
you, knowing that you don't know that you are his
deadliest enemy. I see him using you to further his cause,
the cause that Karak swore to destroy, just as it destroyed
his family. I do not see Karak as I know him. I see a
new Karak that has changed with being a woman. That
woman is you.

I do not know what happened or how you came under
Cak's magic spell. I do not know if you can escape it. Or
if you want to escape it. I cannot let an old friend just
die. So with my last bit of energy, I am writing this
letter and having it held until I know that you are under
Cak's control.

Maa

My hands shook as I read the letter. I dropped it and walked
around the room. I picked it up and read it again. This must be
a trick. It cannot be so. I am Maya. Karak is my enemy. Cak
is my friend and master. No one controls me. I do as I want.
Which is to serve Cak.

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