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Pick- up Line by BKB


All stories on this web site are purely FICTIONAL. The people depicted within these stories only exist in someone's IMAGINATION. Any resemblence between anyone depicted in these stories and any real person, living or dead, is an incredible COINCIDENCE too bizarre to be believed. If you think that you or someone you know is depicted in one of these stories it's only because you're a twisted perverted little fucker who sees conspiracies and plots where none exist. You probably suspect that your own MOTHER had sex with ALIENS and COWS and stuff. Well, she didn't. It's all in your head. Now take your tranquilizers and RELAX.

Pick-up Line
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"Another night of unbridled fun" Dave thought sardonically as he took
another swig of his rapidly-warming beer. His eyes scanned the nightclub and
he sighed heavily. His gaze wandered from woman to woman as he searched in
vain. His buddy Tom clapped him hard on his back and roared "Find her yet,
Dave m'boy?"

Dave snarled at Tom's jest and took another swallow of his beer. "No I
haven't, you big idiot!" he snapped. Tom raised his hands and replied "Whoa!
Didn't mean to piss ya off!" Dave's angry face didn't fade and Tom said
"You're being too picky, man. You're always looking for the ultimate woman!"

Dave's eyes stared back at Tom's suggestion and he shrugged slightly. His
head dropped and he shook it slowly. "Maybe you're right. But I found her
once" he reminded him. "I was so damn close, man" he moaned.

"Don't I know it!" Tom replied. "Remember who was standing next to ya in
that monkey suit, hoping to hell the rings were still in my pocket!"

Dave nodded as he recalled that fateful day. Everything went smooth as
silk. "Should've been the first thing to tip me off" Dave thought as he
recalled the shock when his fiancee never showed up to their wedding, leaving
him standing at the altar completely shattered. Tom's hand on his shoulder
woke him from his reverie and he looked up. Tom smiled at him and said
"Seriously, man. The last thing you need is to hook up with another one who's
gonna bust you up again. Take it easy and try not to look for Miss Right every
damn time!" He laughed and added "There's something to be said for Miss Right
Now!"

Dave took in his friend's words and his frown melted away. He laughed loud
and gave Tom a friendly punch in the chest. "I heard that!" he grinned
wickedly. Tom returned the punch and asked "When is the last time you...?"

"Don't go there" Dave cut him off. "You just broke me outta my funk, don't
send me back in!"

"Holy shit!" Tom exclaimed. "Not since Elaine?" he asked.

"Nope" Dave replied simply, shuddering slightly at the mention of his
wayward fiancee's name.

"Well no wonder you're so damn screwy tonight!" Tom laughed. "We've gotta
get you a woman, m'boy!" He polished off his beer and looked at Dave's. "Time
to reload!" he chuckled, turning to the bartender and ordering two more. He
called back to Dave "Your problem is you're too much in love with being in
love. You get involved with a woman and think it's automatically gonna be
forever. You've got to..." he turned around back to Dave but his friend was
no longer there. "Where the hell'd ya go?" Tom wondered aloud as he scanned
the club. Finding him at last he looked ahead to where he was heading and he
saw her. Tom groaned "Oh no! Not again!" He shook his head in frustration and
chuckled "Good luck, buddy!" as he lifted his beer in a toast to his ill-fated
friend.

Dave methodically made his way through the throng on humanity on the
dance floor between him and the woman he had just seen. Not just any woman, he
thought. THE woman. The one his entire life had been meant for. She sat at the
far end of the club's other bar, her long legs crossed seductively as she
perched weightless upon her stool. The slit of her short red dress exposed her
creamy white thigh almost dangerously high, sending Dave's heart rate soaring.
The twins swells of her ample breasts threatened to overflow her plunging
neckline. She laughed as she chatted with another woman, the sound like the
tinkling of thousands of tiny bells. Dave discreetly adjusted his pants to
accomodate the rapid swelling of his penis which was currently pointed at an
uncomfortable angle.

His mind raced as he wondered what to say to this goddess. She was
undoubtedly the most beautiful woman he had ever seen, but something else was
pulling him to her. In her he could see endless possibilities. He pictured
himself with her walking along the beach arm-in-arm, her head resting gently
on his shoulder. He saw her dancing with him, holding close to his body.
Here finally was the one who would love him as he did her, deeply and
completely. Their devotion to each other would be boundless, their existance
inseperable. He saw their wedding and their life together - home, kids, old
age - and he smiled fondly. In her he saw everything he knew love could be.

Reaching her at last he walked over and his hand gently tapped her
shoulder. She spun ever so slowly around, carefully sipping her drink. Her
full ruby-painted lips gently caressed her glass as her light brown eyes met
his staring hazel ones. She slowly lowered the glass and her pink tongue
erotically slithered out and collected a wayward drop of liquid from her lip.
Dave swallowed hard as he saw her face brighten as she saw him. "W...Would you
like to...?" he stammered, his mind suddenly blank and reeling.

She smiled seductively at him and replied in a deep voice "Yes." She stood
and pressed her body to his, wrapping her long arms around him. Instinctively
he lowered his head to hers and kissed her tentatively. She mashed her full
lips to his as she kissed him passionately, crushing her full tits into his
chest. He struggled to stand as his mind whirled about him. "It's her!" his
mind rejoiced.

Her hands roamed freely over him, trailing down his sides slowly until
they stroked teasingly across his buttocks. She pulled him to her and firmly
pressed her mound into his engorged prick. He whimpered into her mouth as the
world quickly evaporated, leaving only them. Her nimble fingers traced across
his ass and then forward, coming to rest on his belt buckle. She popped it
open and in one smooth motion undid his pants, letting them fall around his
ankles. Her hands flew to his cock, jutting out obscenely against his briefs.
She traced her finger slowly over the swollen head as his precum seeped
through the fabric. She collected as much of the wetness as she could and
raised her finger to her pouting lips. Staring into his eyes she snaked her
pink tongue out and methodically licked her finger, savouring his juices.
Slowly she took her entire finger into her mouth and sucked it gently, her
cheeks hollowing slightly. Dave gasped quietly and she smiled brightly around
her digit.

She pulled her finger out of her mouth slowly, still applying the
slightest suction. It exited her mouth with a faint *pop* and her eyes
travelled down his body. Grabbing his member she quickly dropped to her knees,
pulling his shorts to his ankles as she did. Dave's gaze locked on her, still
completely oblivious to the world around him. She handled his turgid sex with
feather-light touches, gently stroking her nimble fingers across his length.
She cupped his heavy sac and rolled his balls carefully in her palm as she
pointed the head at her lips.

She extended her tongue and flattened it out, laying his throbbing meat
upon it. Opening her mouth wide she started taking him in, the underside of
his cock dragging smoothly over her tongue. She continued her progress until
he was deeply embedded in her hot throat. He groaned loudly as she smiled
again. Her lips closed around the base of his penis and she sucked with all
her might. She slowly pulled her head back and his cock slowly reappeared,
glistening with her saliva. She pulled back until she reached the head then
went forward again, taking him back in.

Dave reached down and pulled the top of her dress off, exposing her ample
breasts. His breath caught as he glimpsed the perfectly-formed twin globes,
each topped with a steely-erect nipple the same size and colour as ripe
cherries. He massaged her nips with his thumbs and she let out a long low
moan which rippled through his meat. She quickly removed him from her mouth
and placed his cock between her creamy tits. Her hands pressed them together,
trapping him between. She smiled brightly up at him and started massaging his
prick with her cleavage. His eyes widened as she expertly stroked him towards
his release. His load churned in his balls as she dipped her head back down
to lick at his cockhead as it appeared and disappeared between her tits. "Cum
for me, lover" she purred up at him. That was all the encouragement he needed
as he started to frantically pump his hips forward, fucking her chest
vigorously. With a loud shout his load erupted forth, splashing against her
smooth skin. Her mouth quickly snatched his head and sucked greedily as she
continued to rub her breasts against him. His cum spewed forth rapidly and
she swallowed it all, purring contently. His energy spent, she let his soft
cock slip from her lips and stood quickly, pressing her wet chest firmly into
his. Their lips met again as their thoughts travelled freely between them.
His mind replayed all his previous visions of their future happiness and her
mind agreed heartily. "I'll always be with you" she cooed into his panting
chest. "I love you" he gasped as his mind slowly slipped into oblivion.

* * *

"Sorry, not interested" he heard a far away female voice say. Dave shook
his head slightly and his vision returned, revealing the beautiful woman who
was once again sitting on the bar stool fully dressed.

"Huh?" Dave mumbled stupidly.

She frowned and waved her hand in front of his face. "Hello in there?" she
asked.

"W...What?" he stammered.

"I said 'not interested'. Capiche?" she repeated.

Dave's face fell as he finally comprehended her words. His head drooped
and he turned and slowly plodded out the door into the lonely night.

Tom watched him leave and shook his head sadly. "Shot down in flames
again" he observed as he rapidly tossed back the rest of his beer. "I'd better
go get him" he said quickly before rising and racing towards the door after
his friend. As he exited he heard the song being played inside and shook his
head with a small laugh. Inside the club, the couples slow-danced as Paul
Carrack's voice rang out "I believe when I fall in love with you, it will be
forever..."

FIN

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- Story inspired by the song "Queen of Darkness" by Tony Banks
(Bankstatement - Atlantic 7 82007-2)

- Song mentioned in last line was "I Believe (When I Fall in Love it Will be
Forever)" by Mike & the Mechanics (Beggar on a Beach of Gold - Atlantic
82738-2)

"Pick-up Line"

Pick-up Line is copyright © 1995 BKB. This story may be freely distributed
by electronic media; hardcopies are limited to single printings for personal
use.


 
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