Something that I'm kind of working on.
Masturbatron
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Alright so for a little background, the whole thing is about a guy who is ridiculously in love with a girl, but the girl doesn't feel the same way. She uses the guy whenever she needs to feel better about herself, but when she needs a boyfriend or someone to love, she disregards the guy completely and finds someone else. Of course until that someone she found fucks her over emotionally, and she comes back to the guy to make her feel good again. Yes, this has a lot of my own personal issues in it. But this is just what I've written so far.
Sickened by your actions
Disgusted by your foolishness
He sneaks into her room at night
Securing her limbs; Gagging her mouth
Carefully he removes her clothes
Exposing her delicate, porcelain skin
The edge of his knife tearing at her chest
Watching with joy as pain swells in her eyes
His hands feeling comfort amongst her warm insides
Finally grasping his prize
So yeah, that's all I've gotten so far. I feel like what I've written will probably be more of the inbetween the finished product. I still think it may need more of an ending and way more of a beginning. I don't completely know yet though, but I think what I've done already is pretty promising.
Sickened by your actions
Disgusted by your foolishness
He sneaks into her room at night
Securing her limbs; Gagging her mouth
Carefully he removes her clothes
Exposing her delicate, porcelain skin
The edge of his knife tearing at her chest
Watching with joy as pain swells in her eyes
His hands feeling comfort amongst her warm insides
Finally grasping his prize
So yeah, that's all I've gotten so far. I feel like what I've written will probably be more of the inbetween the finished product. I still think it may need more of an ending and way more of a beginning. I don't completely know yet though, but I think what I've done already is pretty promising.
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It's not about rape, however I can understand with the little sample, one might think that. The guy cuts open her chest and takes her heart in hand, something that he's been wanting for so long. Like I said, this thing is pretty far from finished.
Spot on!